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i found this incredibly boring. i mean... wow ... theres potential...... if u just mixed in some animation perhaps? i mean.... it SO slow moving.... not enough image changes in there to keep it interesting.....
i found the text too heavy going... but the whole production was about the text... and what it was saying.... um... what WAS it saying?
you have art skills... not bad at illustrating.... but for this type of thing perhaps u need even BETTER drawing skills.
one great thing about the animation was some of the effects used.... nicely done.
in general the animation was produced very well... but again... it was just so damn SLOW... ALLL..........THE...........TIME......... i'm pretty proud of myself that i sat thru it all.
top marks for your style.... consistent.... interesting.... and not afraid to subtley break from it from time to time.
maybe i'm just not in to this sorta thing?