EdibleCastle's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[WHAT did you SAY?]

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Hi, you animated the gun shots and gore quite well actually. and I liked the idea of using a lazer pen for the guns aiming thingy. However, the picture quality was bad, as was the modelling, voice acting and audio quality.... oh yeah... the storyline was pretty lame too. I did enjoy the licking of the popsicle though. So at least you ended on a high!

Aljo responds:

I'm almost a beginner in flash so i can't make the sound effects sound awesome crystal clear yet, but i'm tryin to improve it....

[The Orphan: Part 3]

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pretty nice work there. the effects are all done very nicely.

a couple of things I would say though are.. it was all pretty much the same tone throughout - only raised slightly at the end. If you were to change the mood to more of a neutral feeling before 'scary' bits, it might provoked more reaction from the viewer.

The character animation wasn't the best either. Adding eases to the tweens (especially on head movements) might help with the realism. The guy in general is pretty plain and I don't really care for him much bcoz of that.

But still. I can't knock this submission. It's a pretty solid effort with some great effects, camera shots and sound. gj

[TRACER episode 1]

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I usually rate animations on entertainment value. This did grab my attention because of the slick style, animation and overall visuals and also good use of sound. But so little of the story was told (i know it must have taken awhile to accomplish this) that I wasnt really left gasping for more. In addition, the dialogue left alot to be desired.

My attitude is probably better desribed by this:
If i notice the next installments I'll watch them. But I wont be especially looking out for them.

cheers.

[The Court Of The Air]

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I liked some of the silhouette scenes. pretty nice style throughout. But i reckon a good narrator would have made this more of a compelling watch. i think subtitles seemed to distract from the animation a bit.

[Blockhead: Episode 9]

hey

Thanks for the Cuboy tribute. He's a very photogenic chap.

[Hamburgerman]

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at the time of this review your cartoons has a score of 3.22 and around 700 views. thats a real shame bcoz this is so much better than most of the rubbish on newgrounds. the graphics and animation were great, the direction was clear and every shot looked well planned.

too bad the kids don't seem to love it. coz i liked it alot.

[I've Got A Sausage!]

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that guy sure walked in a strange fashion!

[Snowman Louie The Lush]

perfect

i loved that. its my favourite for this week by a mile. so sad! poor snowman ): um.... where does he get his booze from? anyway, yeah. for what it was... it was perfect (except one fade) haha. catch u later, man.