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weekly first? wow. good job.
but i dont understand why this is so popular. it must be because u put alot of effort into this... and it was a good length!
the graphics in parts were good.. and let themselves down continually throughout. as did the animation... the style of both animation and graphics would change too.
very badly produced. i saw a border or something at one point at the side of the screen... subtitled text would come out of its border at points. some girls hair went UNDER her eyebrow and eye. i could go on and on. nothing fitted. just generally badly produced.
the voice acting and quality of sound was pretty good tho. gj there.
one other thing... u have no design skills. u need to get better at that.. your cartoons would improve if u do this.
but hell. u have a 4.2+ score here. u probably wont listen to much of this criticism. but seriously.... you should. i'm just trying to help.