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like existentialvoid said. the sound is pretty poor quality. its computer hum. u need to get a better setup if u want to get rid of it. like a better mic and soundcard. u say u cant re-create the problem? just turn your volume up and listen closely for the hum. it will happen on everyones machine. not just some peoples. unless you have poor speakers that just distort everything so its not noticeable.
right, the animation was pretty poor. i dont think you're a good enough animator to be pushing out tuts. people were saying you couldnt make cartoons? they weren't correct but still... this needs alot of work.
the animation seemed out of place. and the intro with the bus was jerky and pretty off putting.
you probably shouldnt have uploaded a teaser. no one really wants to see a teaser. shoulda submitted it to the alpha section of the NG mag instead.
the humor was terrible. you tried to crack some jokes but they fell far short.