EdibleCastle's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[MoreLikeBlue: Ep 3]

goodness

i'll just say one thing about the standard of your cartoon. It was was hawt as Scawt.

Gobi responds:

Thanks Will , very nicely done on your part as well (:

- Brady

[MLB: Halloween]

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nice man. for the amount of time you rattled this out in. i'm well impressed. i predict the 3rd installment of morelikeblue is gonna rock SO hard after seeing what you can do with a tight deadline. gj

Gobi responds:

haha good job yourself, Will

[Nuggets Ep8 - Hard Times]

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i love the style of this. and pretty good humour too. I havent caught any of the other episodes of this series but i might watch some later. but yeah anyway... this deserved much more than daily 5th. its gold! shoulda had daily 1st for sure.

Miggs responds:

Thanks for the support, man! One day we'll get Daily Feature.

[Xionic Revolution]

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the last one was made much better than the first 2. the first two were well below the standard of the 3rd.

Xionico responds:

thanks XD, well the other ones were somewhat old projects that i never released, so i think its normal that the other one which is recent is better than the other ones.
great work on calderbank 2 =O!

[FF: Mixed in Balamb2(1/3)]

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weekly first? wow. good job.

but i dont understand why this is so popular. it must be because u put alot of effort into this... and it was a good length!

the graphics in parts were good.. and let themselves down continually throughout. as did the animation... the style of both animation and graphics would change too.

very badly produced. i saw a border or something at one point at the side of the screen... subtitled text would come out of its border at points. some girls hair went UNDER her eyebrow and eye. i could go on and on. nothing fitted. just generally badly produced.

the voice acting and quality of sound was pretty good tho. gj there.

one other thing... u have no design skills. u need to get better at that.. your cartoons would improve if u do this.

but hell. u have a 4.2+ score here. u probably wont listen to much of this criticism. but seriously.... you should. i'm just trying to help.

Toonimated responds:

hehe of course i listen to all critism, specially from the dude of Whitmooooooooooore the tooooaaaaaaaddd Piiiiraaate! Lmao i love those series. u should keep doing them.

"yes, yes, we know" lmao

Ehhh, well thanks for ur review, the quality changes as hell because we are 2 artists in this one. so that might be the reason. about the borders, thats wierd...havent seen them...would be cool if u point them out...

Peace!!!
WHIIIIIITMOOOOOOOOOOOOREEE THE TOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOAD PIIIIRATEE

[' L o s e r ']

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no. that was terrible. why does it have such a high score? the graphics were bad. the animation was worse. eg. why did the characters facial features move so independantly from the rest of their face? that was bog awful.

Quimera responds:

hey its again you!!!!!

WHITMOOOOOOREEE THE TOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOAAD PIRAAAAAAAAAAAAAAATE!

hey un stop being an ass? lol. its like...ur movie graphics arent mind blowing....so....stop being like that.

Anyway

WHIIIIIIITMOOOOOOOOOOOREEEEEEEEEEE THEEEEEEEEE TOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOAD PIIIIIIIIIIRAAAAATE

[Napoleon Toadamite]

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this was a horrible horrible parody. what a great film napoleon dynamite is and it seems to me you're trying to destroy it. why? why would u do that?

the graphics are bad, the sound is bad, the animation is VERY mediocre. and the humor is non existent.

I hope no one watches this movie and thinks its a good true representation of the real film. i know if i saw this first i wouldnt have wanted to watch the real movie.

the thing is... it musta taken u awhile to create this... alot of hours put in... and for what? u've come out at the end of it all with utter crap. i'm sorry... but this is rubbish, you guys must be young.. or u woulda known better not to make this.... hold on let me check your profiles.... geez.. 20, 22, and 23???? i really was expecting a kind of 13 to 15 age range.

the only thing i can credit u with is your apparent high levels of motivation. good luck with future productions. i hope you improve and i look forward to seeing it

Tobunshi responds:

At first when I saw you said my graphics sucked, I checked your profile to see if you had any flash. To my surprise, you did that whitmore thing, I loved that. Who knew good animators could be such assholes?

[MGS: TAS Episode 1]

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lol this was so badly made it was kinda funny!

bvhj responds:

Thanks.. I think...

[Dark Seat Comfort]

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great stuff. shoulda definetly got 1st or 2nd for the day i think. did you use a real person for reference while drawing this? its just.. the arms looked a bit short in length... especially on the loading screen.

but lovely animation... altho it probably needs a few more inbetween drawings to make it a little smoother.

Lelio-rising responds:

yeh i used a reference... hah i never noticed that until now(the short arms i mean)

[x2200 and B.O.B.]

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nice comic timing. has potential. sound sucked... u need a better way of getting a robot voice.... sometimes i couldnt make out what was being said. oh and the spanish flea music at the credits.... very overused. but yeah.... i'd have liked this more if you'd maybe had a few camera cuts and better sound. cool. nice one. cya.

Ironfistx responds:

Thanks alot for the feedback, I'll take that into consideration for the next one. I've gotta work on backing off those cliche's but I just loved the segway between the end of the movie and the spanish flea music. :)